Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Stealing The Moon: Blogophilia week 1.5 -- Going The Extra Mile


Written for:
Blogophilia week 1.5 -- Going The Extra Mile


Bonus Points:
(Hard, 2pts): include a dream symbol
(Easy, 1pt): include a George Carlin quote(s)








There are nights when the wolves are silent 
and only the moon howls
echoing tremors 
running through this hollowed  heart
caved in...
by  your  speeding chariot 




going the extra mile
scooping ...
serving it on a silver celestial bowl
while I dream of ascension
taking that  torn piece of me back home.
I know exactly what I came here for.





16 comments:

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    1. Thanks Sue! Nice firsting!Thanks for helping me steal the moon,LOL!

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  2. Dreamy .... saving oneself from life's desperation...
    puts me in a mood and makes me think....
    brilliant read Feathered Pen ....
    L.Z. awesome! xxx

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    1. I am so glad to hear that!:)
      By all means, dream...sometimes it's better than reality :)
      Thanks!!!

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  3. Wow, I am at a loss for a song to throw at you. Stunningly visual and viseral

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    1. Thanks for the wow!:) Actually,that's what I've been thinking about since last night,too. This song came out easily in my mind but I can't think of any other song either :)

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  4. This is such an amazing & powerful piece, Ruz!!! Left me reeling. Absolutely fantastic job with the prompts this week. :D

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    1. Likewise Colleen when I read your posts :) Can't wait to read yours this week!Thanks!

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  5. Very Very Nice! 8 points Earthling! :) (now would you please put the moon back I use it to adjust my targeting scope so that my aim will be accurate when I blast the Earth to smithereens!)
    Marvin Martian

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    1. Hahaha! Marvin!That's the funniest comment I got from you ever since I joined Blogophilia!Allow us to pay our disconnected electric bills first before I put the moon back ,LOL!

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  6. Stunning Blogophilia. Very symbolic; is the quote in the opens lines?
    There are nights when the wolves are silent
    and only the moon howls...

    I love that!

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    1. Yep,the first line was the quote from Carlin.Thanks Sharon and glad to see a new face here.And thanks for adding that tiny sticker of yours among my followers :)

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  7. I love being outdoors feeling the warmth of the sunshine, but there has always been something magical about looking at the moon and daydreaming? in the dark!

    Joanie

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    1. Right,Joanie.And shooting the moon,hanging it on the rooftop is one of my fantasies :)

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  8. this is simply breath taking my dear. Love the pictures, your words are what I call WOW too! The song is a perfect accompaniment. ♥☺☻

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    1. Divinia! When did u get here?lol! Sorry, I don't open my associated email for this account that I usually don't see notifications immediately once a new blog is up.Thank you so much for coming over and the WOW!:) Please post a link on my wall whenever u have a post too anywhere so I can keep up with your writings.((huggsss))

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